"11 Coffee and Co/" second review
oninross
I'm Niño Ross Rodriguez (oninross), a Senior User Experience (UX) Developer with nine years of industry experience, specializing in developing pixel perfect websites quickly without sacrificing code quality and ensuring that users have the best UX they can get in a site.
As a Senior UX Developer, I love being challe...
Nino Ross Rodriguez
The site reflects of who 11 Coffee and Co is and its inviting with the clean look and use of typography and line drawings.
Some comments though:
You could increase the line height just a tad bit as its too packed for the paragraphs, a bit hard to read
Big play button in the Our Story is misleading. Users are already used to how YouTube is displaying the play button and users know that by clicking that button, it will play the video. Hovering over it doesnt help the users to notice that there is a play button there. If youre going to put a play button there, align it to the left. Controls are most of the time on the left side.
The map didnt work at all. It made the site a bit dirty. The markers blended too much on the map that I couldnt even notice it
The highlighting style of the text is confusing. I dont know if its a link or not.
I dont see the point of the Back to Top and the Menu together. One or the other I would suggest. The menu to jump around the different sections or the Back to Top just to jump back up. Its just a one pager.
"11 Coffee and Co/" first review
Vincent
I'm a French UX Designer and Art Director, originating from Poland and currently living in Canada. I see every project I am involved in as an opportunity to go further, providing my clients and employers with quality materials and a great working relationship.
Vincent Przybyla
The "make yourself at home" look and feel didn't fail to be communicated, and this coffee shop looks friendly and definitely a place to discover if I were in the neighborhood ;)
The UI and layout would definitely need improvement.
Those chunk of texts are not pleasant to read and digest. A simple thing like increasing the line-height of the paragraph would help. And the background besides them not only don't help to the legibility, but they contribute to a messy and amateurish (not in a positive way) feeling.
I'm not a fan of the boxed layout, make it full-size!
The section are not clearly divided, and everything is stacked and feels a bit messy (use some space in between them).
I don't see the point of the navigation into a hamburger icon for such a small page.
Thumbs up for your contents (photos and videos) :)
