"Ian Jones" second review
Interesting approach.
I really like the "print on the web" creative axis but it deserves a bit more settings to be totally astounding.
You have great ideas, such as the contact button opening a layer on the header. Same for the global design of the portfolio. I would love to see a bit more of your work and about your approach, it seems we only have an exterior vision of your work and you do attract us with a specific approach. Show us more!
Your info page could be really engaging, but I do not share the same feeling as on the home, it's a pity because your text is clear and accurate.
Your URL and global seo need an update too. Pay attention to that, it's really important.
Nice job!
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I work on mixture of independent projects and also with creative agencies. I try to cover many disciplines (sometimes too many) and focus on creating interesting, high-quality work.
Thank you both Wibicom and Maxim for your very well written and useful feedback. I'll use this site as a building platform to show more detail, and hopefully more depth.
Absolutely agree with the "Show us more!". The home page shows visitor a great start of the awesome journey and this journey suddenly ends with the redirect to the different part of the reality, system, created based on different rules.
First great impression slipping away and you never again will be able to recreate it (regarding this version of the composition of course :)
Show us more! The home page presents site as complex creation, but very soon you figure out that this is one page portfolio, good one page portfolio.